What to Include in an Obituary: A Thoughtful Guide for Families in Dayton and Kettering
What to Include in an Obituary: A Thoughtful Guide for Families in Dayton and KetteringWriting an obituary is one of the most meaningful ways to honor a loved one’s life. But in the midst of grief, knowing what to say or how to start can feel overwhelming. At Westbrock Funeral Home, we’re here to guide families in Dayton, Kettering, and surrounding communities through every step of this deeply personal process.
Whether you're writing an obituary for a newspaper, website, or funeral program, this guide can help you create a tribute that feels both personal and respectful.
✍️ What to Include in an Obituary
There’s no one right way to write an obituary, but most include these key elements:
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Full Name and Age
Begin with the full name of your loved one (including any nicknames they were known by), along with their age at the time of passing.
Example:
James “Jim” Thompson, 76, of Kettering, Ohio, passed away peacefully on April 12, 2025.
2.
Date and Place of Death
Include when and where the death occurred, especially if the service will be held locally.
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Brief Biographical Information
Share highlights of their life story such as where they were born, education, work, military service, marriage, children, hobbies, or passions. This can be brief or more detailed depending on your space.
Tip: Focus on what made them unique. Mention accomplishments, causes they cared about, or qualities they were known for.
4.
Family Members
Most obituaries list immediate family members:
- Spouse (living or deceased)
- Children and grandchildren
- Parents and siblings (if desired)
Example:
Jim is survived by his wife of 52 years, Carol; children Michael (Jennifer), Sarah (David); and four grandchildren.
5.
Service Details
Include the date, time, and location of visitation, funeral, or memorial services. Westbrock Funeral Home can assist in coordinating and confirming this information for the obituary.
6.
Memorial Preferences
You may wish to add a line about donations in lieu of flowers, especially if your loved one supported a particular charity or cause.
Example:
In lieu of flowers, donations may be made to the Alzheimer’s Association or the Dayton Humane Society.
💬 Personal Touches Make a Difference
Adding a favorite quote, a brief memory, or a note about your loved one’s personality can make an obituary feel more personal.
Examples:
- “Jim never missed a Reds game and loved Sunday cookouts with his grandchildren.”
- “Her laughter filled every room and she brought kindness wherever she went.”
🕊️ We’re Here to Help
If you’re unsure where to begin, the team at Westbrock Funeral Home is here to assist. We help families in Dayton, Kettering, and surrounding areas craft obituaries that reflect the life and legacy of their loved one.
Our staff can:
- Guide you through writing or editing the obituary
- Submit it to local newspapers or publish it on our website
- Offer suggestions for meaningful wording and formatting
📍Serving Dayton, Kettering, and Beyond
Since 1892, Westbrock Funeral Home has supported Miami Valley families with compassionate care and attention to detail. Whether you need help with funeral arrangements, obituary writing, or grief support, we’re available 24/7.
If you need assistance writing an obituary or planning a service, please don’t hesitate to reach out.
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Call us anytime at (937) 776-8428
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